Este blog esta hecho para las prácticas de redacción de inglés en primero de carrera , cuyo autor es Enrique Rubio Rodríguez y pertenece al grupo B2
domingo, 29 de noviembre de 2015
Essay
This essay is about my best friend´s birthday which was celebrated last saturday in Albacete, she reached 18.
She is from Albacete, but now she is studying in Valencia, so we prepared her party in Albacete with all her family and her other friends who live in it. Some friends and I have to catch a bus to go there, it took us two hours, when we ariived her mum piched us up and take us to a bar to decirate it and waiting for my friend whiles she was walked around her city with her friends. We bought some streamer, ballons and confettis. Before she arrived , we were hidden behind the counter. At the end se arrived and she told us that it was a nice surprise for her becuase she thought celebrate her birthday other day. After that we had dinner in the bar where we had been decorated all the afternoon. Finally, we gave her our presents which were a beret, due to she would like to be an artist, a water pipe , a poster with some pictures of three. Therefore , We drank a bit alcohol and dance too.
Finally, I think it was a great day, and the most important she enjoyed her day as a child, with her cousins, her uncles, her mum, her bother and of course her firends. It was a wonderful party and day.
jueves, 26 de noviembre de 2015
Problem and solution paragraph
I had a friend that he does not speak with his mother because she lied him. One day his mother told him that she went to abroad with her best friend. However, the same day a friend of him, who live in Madrid, said to him that he had seen her mother with a man walking around Retiro park in Madrid, at the beginning muy friend could not believe it, but two hours later he saw her mother´s best friend eating in a restaurant with her husband, her son and her daughter. When his mother came back, my friend saw her some pictures where she was walking around Retiro park with a man. she was eating in a restaurant in the centre of Madrid etc, so he asked her what those pictures means and why she had lied him as she could not tell him what it was happend certenly, my friend decided to stop speaking with his mother.
One solution to this problem must be his mother speak with him and told him the truth about that trip and why she lied him, but my friend don´t want to speak with her, so he don´t look at her mother, he don´t answer her called, her whatsapp etc. In adittion he isn´t livinh in his house with his mother, he is very upset that´s ehy he decided not to go to school at this moment. However, the best solution I think that they must go to a psichologist to solve this problem because I know my friend love his mother a lot.
Introduction and conclusion paragraph
Using the internet is a good way to search something quickly and to have social networks such as: Facebook , Twitter etc. for chatting with some people who live away. However, internet, specially the social networks can be adicttive, so be careful with it and the less you use it the less adicttion for you.
Finally, I think that the internet and social networks is one of the best new technologie that it have created by human, In adittion one of the best social advancement was you can speak with other people who live away, but sometimes can create some adicttion.
Outline: Broken home
1- Broken home is a family where one of them does not work well
2- Causes
- problems between mother and father
- death mother
- alcoholic`s parents
3- Consecuences
- their children don´t continue studying
- unsociable children
- nightmare of what the saw
Finally, when some family doesn´t work well means that they have several problems can affetc to their children for example: they don´t continue studuying or they have not any friend because they can be afraid of somebody. That´s whay some of them need a psichologist to solve their problems
martes, 13 de octubre de 2015
My experience in New York
This essay is about my travel to New York. I went to New York few yaers ago when I was 15 years old. I´ve been there during a week.
I went to New York, where I haven´t ever been before, with my cousin, my uncle and some of their students. They were older than my uncle and I, they were 17 or 18 years old. I stayed in a house with a family and my firend was older than me too, so I was the youngest and I felt like that. We lived in the suburbs , it took us 15 minuts to go to New York by car.
We did a lot of and different things like doing some activities at their school, one of them was paying attention in their English class, but at the beginning I didn´t understand anything, we went to the theatre, we went to go shopping to a great shops , where I spent a lot of money. However, the best activitie was when we visited New York , it was an awesome city , it was a huge city which had got a lot of high buildings with some publicity and some lights in it, there were many people who can speak Spanish and there were many hot dogs kiosks at the streets.
One of the best thing of the travel were the nights, because our friends had got their own cars so we wen to other houses by cars for drink a bit alcohol and danced a lot. Besides, in the houses there was a swimming pool that´s why we decided to swim in it one night, by the way , that night was the best.
Finally, I think that travel was one of the best in my life, because I met a lot of people, I did wonderful activities, I learnt a lot of English and this travel changes my style of life.
viernes, 9 de octubre de 2015
Opnion paragraph
This essay is about dogs mustn´t be in parks. Last week I saw how a dog beat a child who was playing football with his friends, the dog was loose , so I think that dogs can´t be loose in parks while there are some children who are playing with their friends or some people who are walking around the park. Therefore in my opinion the best option for all would be doing a specific park where dogs could play and run around the park without disturb people.
domingo, 4 de octubre de 2015
A Nice Surprise
This essay is about my experience in the Camp Nou where Barça beat 4-0 Elche.
My cousins and my uncles live in Barcelona so some christmas we go to Barcelona to see them. Moreover, my uncle and my cousin like football, like me, our team is Barça. Two christmas ago we went to Barcelona and in this case Barça had to play against Elche that´s why my uncle and my cousin decided to take me to the Camp Nou to watch the match. it was my firt time , the pitch was very big and we could see how Barça socred two goals in front of us, I filmed one of them.
Finally, I think that it was one of the best experience in my life. It was a nice surprise because all my famliy knew it except me so I enjoyed the day as a child.
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